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Your poem really flows nicely, I loved reading it. You should definitely enter it into a contest on YWS!!! About coping with weather or something along those lines!! Again, your ...

this is my favorite poem of yours, I call it, hahaha. It speaks so much to those with poor self esteem!!! this could be a poem that girls read to ...

The way you wrote this poem, and the mood that you set. It was just amazing reading your poem, really. This poem would be good in a frame, anyway. The ...

Your poem is beautiful and poetic!!! I couldn't find any errors with anything. I loved the imagery, and the following reviews I am going to do for you will mainly ...

At first I wasn't going to read and review your poem because it seemed so long, but once I started reading the words just flew by. Because you drew me ...

Wow, the imagery in your poem, the first thing I noticed, is simply amazing. Your poem should seriously be featured. My favorite part just has to be this: You lured ...

I love the rhymes in your poem, soft and very poetic. I also like the image of a sad girl, her heart broken, comforting herself. This is a very good ...

Wow, I was leaning, actually leaning, into my computer screen. The story keeps progressing and getting better and better. This is the type of book I would love to read. ...

I loved it, it's better without the stanzas, it's like your really rushing to write your thoughts down before "she" comes. Like you're trying to put all of your mingled, ...

I love this, it's beautiful and poetic and just perfect. I know your probably like, my poetry perfect. But that's it, its simply put, with no dramatic big words to ...

Wow, I love it!! Your poem is written with passion, and that's the number one thing you need. i could go on and on about the beautiful imagery of this ...

Oh I am hooked. I have to read the rest. It took me a while to read this, but it's just simply awesome!!! I can't pick out any grammatical errors, ...

Wow, this is awesome!! I love the second verse and the bridge because it really brings out the song's meaning and what you are trying to get across. A lot ...

This poem made me tear up, and as I write this review, I can barely focus enough on the words. Seriously your poem left me speechless, the passion in it, ...

When I read this poem, I really think about life. That may not be what your poem is about, but that's how I feel about it. It makes me think ...