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I don't know from personal experience what you're going through right now, but I've been there for my friends who are/have been in your position. I love that you're willing ...

I like it so far. There is a dark tint to this that is very hard to portray. There are a few mistakes. "But there is that rare occasion where ...

I love this! I don't really see anything to change because I believe poetry is an interpretation of your feelings and who am I to judge/review your feelings? I like ...

First, let me say that I think this is really good. It's probably one of the best chapters I've read tonight. Second, there were a couple mistakes. "I sighed and ...

This sounds really good. I can tell you know a lot about what you're talking about. The only things I can see are a few missing words. "Our duty comes ...

I really liked this. I'm not a big poet myself, but I was always taught that in poetry there doesn't have to be a consistent rhyme scheme or correct punctuation ...

I liked your piece very much. I loved the way you set the scene. I think the "There is...There is...There is..." is appropriate for the type of story you portrayed ...

I also wrote a story on addicts. It's a difficult thing to write about, especially if you don't know someone who is/was an addict or previously/are one yourself. It's also ...

Hey, first I want to say that you are a strong person! Going through a disease like Alzheimer’s with someone you love is one of the most difficult things in ...

I like your story so far. I think it should've been longer, but the adjectives you used created a very vivid picture. It kept me entertained and absorbed. I don't ...

I really enjoyed this. The title could've been better, but it's difficult to decide sometimes. I liked how the story progressed and the word choices you used. The story ended ...

I really, really, really enjoyed this! It was twisted and just fantastic! You're details and imagery are amazing! You're an awesome writer. There's nothing to change. Good punctuation, correct grammar

When I first started reading, I got confused because of the POV change. This is a really good story; I like the details and imagery you portray. There's only a ...

First, I'm going to start out saying that I really like this story so far and you have a great flow going on here. Second, you're an extremely good writer. ...

I'm not going to lie. It's the title of this essay that caught my attention. I agree with what you're saying. Mother Earth does deserve respect; being our home planet, ...