legendarycomputerpoetry

Hi BluesClues, Thank you for posting the second draft of this poem. I find it refreshing when authors do not simply abandon their projects once they've been thrown into the ...

Thank you for sharing today. I will write a quick review. This poem is clearly a rather personal one; the evidence being how you insert yourself into the poem with ...

Hello! A short-and-sweet type poem where every word has significance in it. You don't sprinkle in adjectives where they are not necessary, nor do you stay so simple that no ...

Hello! First, this poem is organized neatly. Sometimes authors employ a stylistic device to alter the stanzas and the text in them, but there was no need here to! As ...

Hello! I love, love, love the imagery in this poem! It is so realistic, raw even. The overall tone is haunting, like a fog misting over a graveyard. My favorite ...

Hello! First, I liked how you talked to a multitude of things; a rusty chain, a cup of tea, and the wind. I am sure that those inanimate objects see ...

Hello! I love this! So self-aware and the story does not take itself too seriously. This reminds me of Undertale (pacifist route, of course), it has the same friendliness energy. ...

Hello! I like the imagery in this poem. Though, I can't help but feel like these stanzas are disconnected from one another. They are all beautifully written, the prose has ...

Hello! Not gonna lie, I read the last line as "deppirt" like a clown. Other than that, this poem was clear and the flow was easy to flow! I can't ...

Hello! The overall idea of this poem is great! Supporting characters do not get much development in stories because, well, they are the supporting characters. However, I think this introspective ...

Hello! Overall, good job. I liked the formatting of this poem - specifically the list, as it makes what I think is your main concepts clear and organized. The imagery ...

Hello! Ah, this is amazing! This is so beautiful. Somehow, you even managed to take something as random as crows and create stunning imagery with them. There is an element ...

Hello! First of all, the formatting of this poem is perfect! I like when writers utilize the spacing on documents to further drive home the message they had written. The ...

Hello! My gosh, I have been in your position before. This is an excellent way to portray the feelings of utter panic, desperation, and fright when getting a message from ...

Hello! I like how this poem's stanzas were numbered. I am not sure why I like it so much, maybe because the organization is satisfying? Anyways! The concept was rather ...