lauramydear

hey there! here to review for you! So I love where this is going. I love the ideas and I love how her character is relate able. Everyone goes through ...

Hey there! Laura here to review!! I just want to start out that this was a great story and it kinda freaked me out o.O I couldn't really find anything ...

Hey there! Laura here to review your work. I would like to start off that I really liked this piece. You are a very good writer and very creative. I ...

Hey there!! Laura here to review! So I am going to be completely honest...this story was really creep. And I felt like I was in the mind of a psychopath. ...

Hey there! Laura here to review your work!(: So first thing I would like to bring up is the dialogue. You need to make it it's own paragraph when switching ...

Hey there! Here to do a review! This chapter was good, I liked that it didn't turn to him being a vampire like I had feared. There is still shortness ...

Hey there! I'm here to review yet another chapter of your novel! I feel like I'm starting to repeat myself, MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!! You are killing me with these ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your piece. I have to say that this was good, and I enjoyed it. It did confuse me at some parts and intrigued me ...

Hey there! I'm here to review. This is my first time reviewing poetry and I'm going to give it a go. So if I'm completely missing the meaning behind what ...

Hey there! Here to review your piece! This was pretty good, and you got me interested. And I over all thought it was a cute story. Even though you might ...

Hey there! I liked this, when I was little I thought unicorns were the coolest things ever, since I'm a horse lover and all, I thought a horse with a ...

Hi there! Laura here to review for you!(: So let me start off by saying this story was amazing, and I read it a few times before I decided to ...

Hey there! I'm here to review for you(: So I just want to begin with this isn't a bad idea, and I'm not really into this kind of thing, but ...

I need you to give me details. Just think when you write...DETAILS DETAILS DETAILS! Because if you think about it, everyone will ask you, what did this look like, or ...

This was still good...its just that you changed things up. Like you were in a hurry to write this chapter. and can i say WAY TO SHORT! That wouldn't even ...