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Hi, Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing. I am a little freaked out though, because I am going through the exact same things. I mean exactly. I can ...

Hi, Wonderful poem. It was very pretty. I really liked. It was a nice short read. Make sure you re-read your work before posting it. Then you can find grammar ...

Hi, This story is really well done, Kels. I really like. I'm glad that you put it in other fiction. It is a really good story, but it wasn't really ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! This is the best site to post your work and read other peoples. I thought I would critc your work, no one else has. Make sure ...

Hi, Extremely Hilarious! I have never read anything quite this funny before. I have to admit that when I first started reading it, I thought it was a bit strange, ...

Hi, Excellent job on this poem. I really liked it. It's hard to find good poetry :wink: I am not very good at poetry myself, so I will not be ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. It was a good piece. I liked the part about the remote control, it stood out from the rest of the poem! I didn't ...

Hi, I'm not going to crtic, because a few people all ready did and because I didn't find any mistakes. I really liked this story, I'm not really into to ...

Hi, This was really well written. I'm not going to correct your mistakes Gwenevire & GryphonFledgling (sorry it was a typo)already did. So I will just simply tell you what ...

Hi, This story was very well written, I hope you plan on writing more. I'm not going to pick apart your story like everyone else, just watch for your grammar ...

Hi, So I'm going to fix up your work for you! My Library Boyfriend With my new Topshop bag slung round my shoulder, and my hair bouncing off my shoulders, ...

Hi, I have a tip for you. If you space out your work more people will red it. When people write it like this: I mope in through the backdoor, ...

Hi, That was excellent! I really liked it! How much more are you going to write? I didn't see anything wrong with it, just watch your grammar. I really liked ...

Hi, Very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. I did notice a few mistakes though: “Oh, no”, she breathed. *** “What happened at that home?” the police chief asked. You ...

Hi, I really liked this poem. You told the truth about war. I honestly do not get the point of war. It's completely stupid. My favorite line was: The blood ...