kogarasumaro143

Great! Very interesting and I like it.. keep up the good work.. I remember that day,  The day you wisked my heart away, I had never felt this way before, ...

Elegance! This is the framework of your poem... Uniqueness in the sense of presenting wind in a metaphorical way. and Greatness for which I refer to the ideas of yours. ...

So, metaphorical... I like it... I sit and stare. I don't care, If its just a flick of your hair, Or muffled words that you share. Your hazel eyes, ordinary ...

Historial poetry?? Hmmm... nice for it is my first time to read like this.. Great! Large shoes stamp the street, I’ve never worn boots before, my feet feel heavy. “Here ...

Hmmm... I see this as too traditional YET very nice... Remember the days, when we would dress up for fun, And when we would hold hands, With everyone. The days ...

At first I see this poem pure of LOVE but when I finished reading, it is no love, IT IS LUST! ahahahaha... great twist! Please comment and critique..... When I ...

Great and interesting kind of poem! Really feel the pain and all the emotions you have. Literally, I felt it. SO consider my suggestions Sadness utterly my own Only I ...

I love it! You're different in writing poems about love for you showcase it as Love in the darker side. To what love should not be for love is the ...

Hey! I like the topic! An android made for mass destruction? Hmmm, interesting... I am a man made of metal, created to survive. A secret weapon, at a secret base. ...

Its my first time to encounter this kind of sc-fi. Great! I like it. Its undeniably unique... GREAT write. "Ten..." I wanted to be a starpilot when I was a ...

Its pretty and cute. Every emotion you set on stage was in detail. Keep it up. You are in the right track. Dark clouds hover above my head I feel ...

hey this poem is really good Not too long not too short =) I agree! Its not to long to be bored and not to short for senseless ideas. Its ...

Amazing. I didn't expect that the flow will be like that. Maybe its my first time to read a story where a dragon is not dependent to his master and ...

Are you trying to show why it is very hard to be an adult or maybe a teenager? Well, you met what is needed. You precisely paint the picture of ...

:D :D :D Teens could relate to what you are saying for we are vulnerable to such inhumane "punishment". Well organize with respect to the flow of your poem. Nevertheless, ...