klennon14

Hello, there! I am here to review your piece :) Just a warning, I am a nitpicker, so please don't take anything I say to heart. Below are simply suggestions/my ...

Hello there! As stegosaurus wrote below, I don't remember much about Pokémon, but I'll take a shot at this review anyway :) I like the very beginning. It pulls the ...

Hello there! Really liked your story and the authenticity. The premise of the story is great and has so potential, and I truly enjoyed reading this. Let's get a few ...

"The difference is, I can shake the water out easily. The voices, though, are stuck in there -- probably forever." I really like this quote, but I'm also against it. ...

Hi there! So I respectfully disagree with a few of the folks down below. I think this poem is spectacular. Yes, there are a few technical kinks that I will ...

Hello there! This review grabbed my attention with the title, and it's an interesting poem :) I enjoyed reading your descriptions of the swimmer, and how she mimics a mermaid ...

Hello there! Overall, this is a great piece, and I really enjoyed reading it. :) I just have a few nitpicks, and it's up to you whether you take them ...

I truly enjoyed this poem! Just a warning, I am a nitpicker, so I'd like to point out a few nitpicks I have. Don't take them personally, it's up to ...

Hey, there. Here for a quick review :) I'm loving all of the capitalization and exclamation points! "Post-modernism on Karl Marx's grave Post-modernism on fuckie-offie lane Post-modernism on the edge ...

Hello there! I am here to review your piece! Just a warning, I am a nitpicker. Don't take anything to heart, as taking any of my advice into consideration is ...

There are tears in my eyes. Are there supposed to be tears in my eyes? I feel like you meant for this song to be comical and I never stopped ...

Hello there! I'm here to review your piece. I am a nitpicker, but don't take it personally. You can take or leave any of my advice :) The first sentence ...

I saw this in the green room, and I am going to review it from a technical perspective since I don't know much about the story :) fyi, I am ...

Hello there! I'm here to review your piece. I appreciate the rawness of the story. I've heard from many mothers that carrying and birthing a child is rewarding, but it's ...

Sometimes, I get sick of long, monotonous poems that take eons to pick through. This is short and sweet and refreshing! The rhythm and rhyming scheme of this poem are ...