klennon14

Hi there! Here for a review :) Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. You described the push and pull of this relationship very well, and how hard it can be ...

Hi there, here for a review! Contradictory to your description, the best time to write about sleep IS when you're tired! All of the real and raw emotions come out ...

Hi there! Here for a review. I really like the ending. That struck me the most out of anything. Those last four lines are great! Really leaves a lasting impression ...

Hi there! Here for a review! Now, I want to start off by saying this is a great base. The only thing is, I don't feel there is enough detail. ...

Wow, excellent job! This piece really creates an eerie, haunting feel that I'm in love with. You provoke great emotion and such pull on the reader. The word choice you ...

Hello there! Overall, this poem has a strong base. I did enjoy the shorter lines and simplicity in your writing style. However, as you pointed out, I would certainly change ...

Hi there! Here for a review :) Overall, I liked the structure and word choice throughout your poem. There are a few critiques I would like to give you, but ...

I don't know what veterinary clinic you worked for, but dang! It sounds like a sweatshop for cripes sake! I love the authenticity of your piece. It just oozes with ...

Hi there! What I like about this piece is I do feel the rawness and the pain of this girl. I feel here relishing in the first moments and longing ...

Hello! I just wanted to say I enjoyed this poem. The simplicity is refreshing and the message is direct. Sometimes I find that people will try to overcomplicate a poem ...

Hi! Here for a review! :) "I had asked her what they put in the water to make it Holy, and she said "God's love", but refused an explanation." I ...

This title certainly caught my eye! Hi there, I am here for to review your essay. :) I completely agree with all of the points you make in this essay, ...

Hi there! Here for a review! "The same wooden floor The same high ceiling" I like these lines a lot! "I feel disgustingly, self conscious." I feel like this sentence ...

Hi there! Alas, I am here for a review! I have never read anything like this. It's very original. I'm impressed by how well you emulate the personality of a ...

Agreeing with AutoPilot down below, how are you ten years old and you can write like this?! It's crazy! You are very talented, and I can tell you are a ...