kioneslayer

Deary, I love vampires, honestly I do. So i thought I'd fall in love with this piece, but I didn't. Use your own beliefs about the vampire and put more....'Oomph' ...

I ran to the window, another lab break was going on outside. The scientist were taking people from Earth and bringing them here to Second Earth. The people from Earth ...

=D It was pretty. D;= But I was instantly bored because the first two lines are too normal, not "different". I could go into a random love poetry book and ...

I think I could only relate to the story, but I wasn't drawn in. Only because if I heard while walking down the street I would think someone was ranting ...

=D I though it was pretty. I have always been a fan of string instruments.(violin and viola the most) I was shocked of how you made the poem flow. It's ...

=D I honestly think it should be a bit more longer. I get a picture, but it's not all that clear, it's fuzzy. I suggest making the new story at ...

=D I thought it was good for the most part. But I got lost easily Between the scene and view hopes, I didn't know who or what was talking. For ...

-claps- =D wonderful. XD I like the kiss the bestest! =D It was random and honestly made me giggle. >< I would have laughed out loud, but daddy's in a ...

=D I'm afraid to know why it was stopped. I was quite interested. 0o Edwin didn't eat the writer, did he? D;= =D I thought it was wonderful, I just ...

neon lights and was a dozen seats put 'there' between 'and' and 'was' bulky man with long black hair and a really screwed up nose. I think you should change ...

I'll be honestly. I loved it. I didn't notice any spelling or grammer mistakes, but that might be because I skip over a few of those kinds of things unless ...

I'll be COMPLETELY honest, yet I'll try not to be rude or anything...D;= rude isn't my style Okay, I couldn't finish reading it, why? Simply. I /didn't understand/! D;= ALWAYS ...

hehe, that was cute. ^^ Could you a little work. It seemed more like a list then a story, but we're not all perfect right? Work on putting descriptions and ...

Very wonderful. I honestly think it could be a bit more descriptive and then there's this: A female, I can hear The hiss she gives Her feminine voice One who ...

XD I thought it was very cute. I honestly don't think the japanese liking fits the protaganist, though. I'm not sure why, but it seems misplaced when a red hair ...