kingofeli

Their ages aren't revealed yet, they will be soon, but for the sake of knowing, Vermillion's about seventeen, nearing eighteen, and Charlie's in the middle range of sixteen. She really ...

Thank you so much! These are all unedited rough drafts so there's a lot of extra fluffy stuff that won't be in the final, but thank you for pointing out ...

Thank you so much for the kind review! Im really thinking of pairing up Vermillion and Charlie, but im not sure yet :p

Thanks! There's actually a second part, I just haven't posted it yet. The whole chapter is like, six pages in word.

Thank you! Yeah, a lot of the stuff gets cleared up after the story progresses

Ah, sorry for that! This is just a quick poem that I doled out and didn't really think on it too much x.x

Pfft, I wasn't expecting that. That was funny in so few words!

Nah, you're not bad at all! I like it when people are tough on my writing, it helps me to get better. I wanted it to be kinda like Warriors ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

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Thank you! I hate animal abuse just as much as you guys do, which is actually why I wrote this.

Thank you so much! Sorry it made you sad, though that was kind of the intent. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though!

Thanks so much! This is one of the best reviews I've gotten on my piece and I really think it'll help me. I did rush this part of the novel ...

Haha yeah, I was inspired by Warriors! Thank you for reading!