kevin25a

Well it's ultimately your decision, but I hope you stay I enjoy your writing. Depression is something so few truly understand, and even fewer can truly cope with. Most assume ...

I loved it more than the last few chapters Sherri berry. :) The biter is smarter than you first wanted it believed. The biter bit his own sleeve. :) I ...

Well something is definitely about to happen, or so it seems. Loved the chapter and am looking forward to the next. So is the border she is at a state ...

I love how you ripped off a mutually enjoyed game. Hyperirion, I totally noticed. I want to say called it because I saw it coming but I didn't say it ...

Ok I will start by saying I loved the story. But I noticed many times you misplaced quotations, and a couple typos. About half of your quotations were misplaced or ...

I want to start by saying I loved this and am very eager to read the next chapter. But I think this is better suited as a prologue than a ...

You sound like me after I first started living on my own before I was even in my teens. The world experienced first hand changes you for better or worse, ...

I love what you did here the goblet of fire was my second favorite movie. I love the ending you did too, the Dragon task force and suing was funny. ...

Loved it tenfold from the last chapter. The music battle was really interesting, I personally saw no problem with it. A healing melody would be soothing, an attacking song would ...

Personally I disagree with the review before me. As a short story that's not chapter based taking time to give a backstory is usually a completely awful idea. It makes ...

I love what you did there. Not sure if it is your honest feelings, but it has great meaning nonetheless. So many are made to be outcasts of society because ...

Like last chapter I am loving the story more and more with each passing chapter. I like how you had a nightmare that's neutral and not for or against the ...

Ok so I will start by saying I liked your story, now to the problems. I'm bad at proper punctuation myself, but your periods and quotations were all over the ...

I like what you did there. Disney crap is just a reused happily ever after cliche. Disney reuses the cliche more than a rechargeable battery gets reused in the 90s. ...

That was just beautiful. By far the best story I have read on this site without comparison. I'm not usually one from drama or romance type story reading, but I ...