kevin25a

Well I read the whole thing, but I will start by saying I only read this chapter. That said I really liked this story, I don't see why other people ...

Depression, a dysfunctional family, a description of something you went through, or domestic violence. I'd say depression because I know it's something you have, you have said so before. I'd ...

This was really good I look forward to where you take the story. Hopefully it all works out for the duo anyways. He obviously cares for her like she cares ...

I think I missed this when you published it but since I reviewed your first and third chapter I figured I would review this one too. Honestly I don't see ...

I don't know why you stopped writing this or why nobody reviewed it. This story is awesome, I really hope you start writing it again. I'm confused as to how ...

It wasn't all that long for two chapters, I'm confused as to how getting drunk and challenging people was a orphanage event. Or how a dress and make up is ...

This was really good, but that's my rpg gamer side obsessing. I have to ask if this was inspired by a game you played. As a hard core gamer it ...

I will start by saying I haven't read the other chapters either, that said I think figuring out what is going on was still very simple. I did want to ...

This was a really good story, I look forward to your next chapters. Reality stories aren't really my favorite but this was really good, it seems almost real too. I ...

This almost reminded me of final fantasy one two and three. Journeying for the Crystal, you did come close to. Your story was really good and I definitely look forward ...

That was... awesome. I definitely didn't expect that to happen, a monster yeah, son of the devil no. I do think you put a bit too much detail into the ...

This was really good, reality stories aren't exactly my favorite but this was really good. I look forward too your story and where you take it, I saw nothing wrong ...

So did I miss it, or did you not say when the beast came from? It was a really good story, definitely ny kind of thriller, look forward too your ...

This was really good, and I definitely look forward to where you take the story. You created a setting, gave it shape, and then added just the right amount of ...

I don't usually agree with falconer's reviews, but for once I do. Although I think the story it's self is really good, and I look forward to your next chapters. ...