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KLAJFL;AKSJDASIDJF OMG THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY! ummm what should I write???? I think you should make this into a novel then publish it and have the publisher peoplez ...

Hii there! This was a great story! Setting was a little bit shaky, though. I somewhat am confused about how this relates to the name of the novel, but it's ...

Hiii again!! :)) I agree with the review below! You could've spaced it out more, because I got a tid bit confused... lining it up, and spacing it out, helps ...

Halloooo! :)) I loved this prologue! I want to read the rest of it! It's so ... beautiful... :') Nicely put together and great use of imagery!

OH. MY. GOSH. A true love story that makes my heart fall. It's so very beautiful, and I think, no flaws. Everything was structured spectacularly.... :) I hope you continue ...

Hello! I love this story! So sweet and simple, although, I think you could've set the setting more vividly? Maybe a bunch of stuffed animals around the room? Jewelry? Clothing? ...

Hi! I absolutely can tell you one thing: This poem is and forever will be one of my favorites! I love the rhyming, and the poem flows so smoothly! And ...

It's sort of nice, like your story before. It's more well structured, and I know more about the characters in the story. I just feel that the ending is somewhat ...

This was somewhat confusing, and I felt it went a little too fast for me. However, it's a pretty nice/sad story. I feel like you could have written more descriptions. ...

Great job on this! I absolutely love it! But I don't entirely get what the song is about.. but THAT'S WHY IT'S A SONG, RIGHT?\ So just keep writing! And ...

Hiiiii!!!! Oh my gosh, I loved this prologue SO SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH. It was just absolutely stunning, and the child... oh my gosh. I'm already a fan. The ending just wants ...

Hi! I think this was a really great poem! But I got somewhat confused how the author is supposed to be related to this "Mr. Bandana Man". Although, at the ...

Honestly, it isn't that good, but I like it. I absolutely LOVE the description. The title sort of fits with this piece, but I recommend a new one. I love ...

Hello! Haha, I know that you just felt like writing. So many things can inspire a young writer's mind from time to time. This poem's lines were a bit too ...

Hello there! I think this was a pretty good story. I loved it. It shows a guy with a little kid, not wanting to do anything serious... and how Gracie ...