katefrench461

I adore this poem!!! It is honestly one of the best things I have ever read. I like the dark message and the stupendous imagery you use. The extended metaphor ...

Hello!! I like this piece. Personally, I read is as kind of like a diary entry (although I'm not sure if that is what you're exactly intending). This form you've ...

I think this is a very powerful poem; there is obviously a significant amount of emotion behind it. It paints a very detailed picture of what seems like a very ...

This is a fascinating piece. I like how it starts out rather ambiguous, and the reader doesn't know about the narrator at all. (I personally thought it was about a ...

Salut! Je m'appelle Kate, et je peux parler bien le francais (presque courrament). I like the idea of this poem, however some of the grammar isn't spot on. In the ...

Hello!! I just wanted to do a quick review of this poem today :) First off, you have so much potential here. The story you tell in this piece is ...

I really like the meaning behind this poem. It's got a really powerful message, and you do a fabulous job of conveying it. The way you've structured this piece really ...

I have to say in advance, I simply adore it when the cliche use of scars is replaced by bruises. It loses a little bit of meaning when you add ...

I really like this poem; it has significant substance whilst not being harsh. You use absolutely wonderful imagery and paint a splendid picture. A quick critique: twice you use dependent ...

This is absolutely fabulous, I have to say. You convey so much in one sentence; it's astounding. The feeling in this poem is extraordinarily universal, and I think it's wonderful ...

I really like this piece, it has such a wonderful tone. I'm a huge fan of having short lines, and so I like the how you've structure this poem. I ...