kaceymackwriter

Hi!

For the line, "Holding defiance past wavering innards", I was trying to say that the narrator was standing her ground even though she felt nauseous and unsure but I was ...

Thank you for taking the time to write a review!! I'm glad you liked it!! I'll try and fix my errors as best as I can! ~Mack

Thank you so much!! That means a lot to me!

For parts of this, I do recognize that it is difficult to understand but that was my intention. In poems like this I write them to be second-guessed and looked ...

I really really like this~! It's so short but clearly describes the emotions that are being evoked. I especially adore the line "The lightning passes from your eyes, just freeze ...

:D i'm so glad you liked it! I was hoping someone would notice that all the dates except for January 1st are seasonal equinoxes signaling the beginning of a new ...

hiya! I'm just passing by with a review! this is an incredibly interesting poem that you've created here. I've never seen or read anything quite like it and I adore ...

hiya! I'm just passing by with a review! this is an incredibly interesting poem that you've created here. I've never seen or read anything quite like it and I adore ...

%uD83E%uDD23 trice means instant

trice means instant so I was trying to say like you have a decision to make each instant: to live in the moment or capture it with a picture. hope ...

omg I've been trying to fix that spacing since last night and it absolutely will not format how I want it to! Its original formatting is exactly what you suggested, ...

well said!!

thank you!!! i'm so glad you enjoyed it and were able to connect with it! :)

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