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For Rosey's contest . Touching sea and touching light, dancing through a breathless night, separating something fright'ning from the carpet where I stand. 'Round me fly the dust specks in ...

i like this! it's sunny, clever, and it's about an original topic, and tells an interesting little story of what goes on when you visit your grandma's garden. the flow ...

this is impressive! i like the way it tells a story. you did a great job of setting the tone, getting the reader into the mood of the piece, and ...

this isn't bad. it seems like a lot of the rhymes are forced, but the overall impression is okay. the poem needs more descriptive words to keep the reader's attention. ...

hey! i'm here to review this. i didn't really like it. it seemed like it might as well have been an essay. if you want to write poetry that touches ...

whoa... this is good stuff. i like the descriptive words you used. Mightily, wheezy, etc. and i like the concept. it's unique. tells a little story of loss, and in ...

this poem hits pretty close to home with most people. it's graphic, and touching, and purely painful and emotional. the only real complaint i have is the last stanza, it ...

i know you said no corrections, but i can't help myself. you said "breathe" instead of "breath". one is a noun form, one is a verb form. sorry... but you ...

i like this. your words paint a beautiful picture for any readers, and i like the way you use plenty of descriptive words without having to take it overboard and ...

this is either the most unconventional poetry i've ever seen, or not poetry. i think this may go under the category of a descriptive essay. however, the ideas aren't bad. ...

i don't like this. it sounds like you might be trying to hard to rhyme, rather than just writing what you're feeling. also, the rhyming pattern bothers me. it seems ...

i love this. i was gonna post a review on it before but it said it wasnt long enough and it rejected my review somehow? ok well i love the ...