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Re: through the years
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. This might be a little shaky but I will do my best. First of all, nice job! I liked how it rhymed, but ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: She died every second she breathed
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. Hope you are having a great day! Grows: none! This was one of the best poems ever. Glows: WOW. This poem was AWESOME!!! ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: ...
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. Hope you are having a good day so far! Grows: "Anne lifted her head to reply as she moved to make his drink, ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: questions only the moon can answer
Hi @luminescence! Hannah here for a quick review. Hope your having a great day so far. Anyways, lets get on with the review! Grows: "with specks of glitter spells out ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: What Seems like a Christmas Carol
Hi Momo! Hannah here for a quick review. Glows: This was a great story! And I liked the theme, helping others. I love Jon's character too. He is a poor ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: things
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. Good job on this! You made the inanimate objects come to life and make people realize things that we take for granted that ...
Dec 29, 2020 -
Re: The Tree of Wishes
Hello! Hannah here for a quick review. I haven't wrote one for a while so it might be a little shaky. This was a great story, I liked the suspense ...
Dec 24, 2020 -
Re: Why Is it a coincidence?
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I feel like this is very well written and expresses very well the frustration of being left out and not ...
Dec 19, 2020 -
Re: INTP, Logician
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I am a logician as well and I think you got everything spot on. I can completely relate to this! ...
Dec 9, 2020 -
Re: Unknown Powers
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, this was descriptive, well written and overall a great story! I am surprised that no one else has left a ...
Dec 9, 2020 -
Re: Dear Young Writer
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, hats off to your creativity! And second of all, this was inspiring! Some people don't like on YWS how you ...
Dec 9, 2020 -
Re: Nobody
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I think that this poem had a lot of thought and heart put into it which is the definition of ...
Dec 9, 2020 -
Re: 2020 Isn't A One Off Year
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. It is good, well written, and accurate. I don't think that this will be the best review but I will try. I think ...
Dec 9, 2020 -
Re: Racing on the Wind
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I know this thing is almost nine years old but whatever. First of all, great descriptions! Second, there were a few grammar/capitalization/punctuation issues ...
Dec 8, 2020 -
Re: camping
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved this! This pretty much describes camping. It is a bliss, it is pleasant. I love how there is a bit of ...
Dec 7, 2020