julia002

The description and imagery in this were fantastic. I liked the religious aspects of it, I always love those kinds of relations and descriptions. "when she says my name and ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I see other people have mentioned how it seems like you're rambling and that it's a little mixed up I guess? But I think this ...

Umm, wtf. This hit me and hurt me right in the perfect spot. I, myself, am trying to get over someone who could not care less about me... I think. ...

I loved every part of this short story. The way it depicts the teenage urge to over-romanticize everything and everyone you see in the halls. It also shows when you ...

You are very good at introducing tone in the story! I could feel his emotions of first-day jitters, romance, and heartbreak. I can tell the story was thought out and ...

The personification of unhuman things always makes me happy. It feels childish and fun in the best way. I can imagine this short story being a children's book. You did ...

I love the setting of being in a ballroom! I think the busyness and vastness of it always sets a good tone for a story. This writing felt very theatrical ...

I think this is beautiful. I always enjoy metaphors or imagery with nature, and I absolutely love personifying it. I often imagine the stars and moon having conversations like this ...

I loved reading this so much! I don't usually enjoy fantasy-ish writing but you incorporated the perfect amount of horror into it which made it highly enjoyable. The plot was ...

It's perfect how I stumble across this poem on Inauguration Day. I think these words painted beautifully and accurately how we all have been feeling these past couple of months. ...

This poem is devastating but important. It was paced perfectly and the structure of it was so perfect for telling this story. I liked how it was centered around the ...

Christ, this is so funny. Their whole encounter had me genuinely laughing and I could picture everything so perfectly. This story has real charm and the reveal that she was ...

I loved how the narrator is talking to me because it feels so personal. You did such a good job of portraying the tension and awkward silence. The silent taboo ...

I read the title and description and instantly fell in love with this concept! You did a great job of portraying the emotions and personalities of the characters. Henery seems ...