jster02

Alrighty then, let's get to reviewing! This is interesting so far. It's interesting to see the "Safe haven for dragons," trope turned on it's head. It makes sense, we humans ...

You've got an interesting main character here. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into her personality and past. The detail about her name was especially cool, because ...

That was a fantastic ending to the chapter. The last line left me wanting more, so that's definitely a good sign. This whole chapter is really interesting because it tells ...

This entire story had me hooked from beginning to end. I like'd how you didn't tell us everything right at the beginning, but sort of sprinkled little pieces of information ...

I have a habit of reading the reviews other people have done on a piece before writing one of my own, to ensure that I don't repeat anything that's already ...

This is certainly one of the sadder pieces I've read. Kudos to you for making me actually feel something while reading a piece. I sense the bike has some symbolism ...

So Arthur is even more of a jerk than I thought. It was nice to see his character develop a little more (even if it was just more proof of ...

I love the character development in the last scene in the cave. It's cool to see you touch upon the arrogance displayed by King Arthur at the beginning of the ...

I know it's been a while, but I'm back with another review. Sorry it took me so long, I got distracted with other things. I really liked how this added ...

So the hooded man is... death himself? That's what I gathered anyway. It makes sense that the man who ferries people to this deathly isle is the very same man ...

I haven't read a piece like this in quite some time, but I quite like them. The changing perspectives remind me of Wonder by R. J. Palacio. I almost feel ...

This is an interesting take on the AI Ruling the world trope. I found it interesting that some of the robots choose to help the humans instead of hurting them. ...

Man, this is sad. You've done a good job evoking emotions in your reader, that's for sure. The suspense built quite nicely as well, so good job on that. That ...

Just when I thought things couldn't get any more interesting. A rebellion against king Arthur! You have truly turned everything upside down. Anyways, let's get down to business... When crossing ...

The plot just keeps getting deeper. I love the complexity of your characters; they seem so real! You have certainly proven yourself as a storyteller. A few nitpicks, (because once ...