jolene15

More lost then I am now.

thanks and no I didn't thanks again

Its very good and right to the point. I like it but I also think it might be better if you add a little more emotion.

It wasn't how I was really just popped into my head when I was listening to music.

thank you

Thank you very much

Thanks

I loved your intro but Liked it all the dream kinda confused me but i liked it.

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Its a very good poem but might sound a little better if it was longer.I also like how it all works together to become a good some what lost me ...

Its really good I enjoyed reading it. It show emotion and that's was what stood out to me the most good job.

I like it a lot very well put.

thanks I am happy to have people comment. I have more poems feel free to comment on them if you want.

This is amazing and beautiful. I like it a lot and enjoyed reading it.

Its very good I like it and dont see anything wrong with it.