Published December 13, 2010
If you're looking for quick love, just find Insecurity, and loneliness.
If you're looking for something more, Good luck.
If you wouldn't mind leave me a comment in one word how this makes you feel. I'm trying to put together some statistics.
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More lost then I am now.
Indifferent.
Because I really don't have an opinion that's either positive or negative. I guess the quick love part kind of made sense, but the Second sentance I didn't necesarrily agree with.
MissMadHatter
It makes me feel hopless, but at the same time the hopelessness triggers a sort of desperation to prove it wrong.
I like it though =)
Hi there I'm China Cookie.
How this makes me feel...makes me feel how I've felt most my life and yes all you have said is true
Thanks everyone, I know it's not poetry I didn't see the "other poetry" option.
My bad.
Sad, but true.... Life it is, what more can i say..
GG
Different
Hey AtticusGallows,
Ok, well, this (I agree) does make me feel a little sad and lost. But I feel even though there are only two, very short, bittersweet lines, its also feels somewhat dramatic to me.
I kinda also agree with SilentRain, I'm not quite sure if this is considered poetry, I suggest putting it in "Other". But good luck with your statistics anyway!
RedLeaf
Sad...
Oh, and, I'm not sure if this is considered poetry...
~Rain~