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Yep, more characters are coming. Thanks for the comment :p

Hey supp le doge here for a review I just want to ask what is your intended audience? Because it appears to be combining elements of a teen dystopian novel ...

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1 It looks pathetic doesn't it? How would you define "pathetic?" Look at that dot. A full stop. A period. Something that all sentences would not have been great without. ...

There is a full stop there. Look at it. LOOK AT IT!

Noooo! Do you not see the little dot?

No, it was not a typo nor a trick. The meaning will be revealed 12 hours after the time of publishing. But seriously, try to comprehend the message behind this, ...

Daaarn, just wrote a full length reply but I had been auto logged out when I posted it. Anyways, changes were made and stuff. I'm lazy to rewrite the reply ...

Oh uhhh, thanks a lot! I'm writing a chapter a day, so stay tuned haha. I really appreciate your comment, I can feel the motivation juices flowing! "The squeals. They ...

Noooooooo! Why did you have to make it a dog?

Hello friend. Join the doge army.

I think it's quite simple. Maybe that's the point of the poem but I'd prefer more figurative speech.

Greetings, fellow atheist! Would you check out if you'd like a debate about atheism vs theism? Atheism movement wooo!

About the title- the point cost- I just wanted to post something and I didn't know what to write, then I saw it. 'The current cost for submitting a new ...

Those warm comments. Thanks, that burst of absolute happiness...something not so easily found anywhere :') I don't know much about poems, sonnets or couplets, this is my first poem. First ...