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Re: Epilogue to a Story that I May Add More to. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Can't really say anything about it as this is an epilogue with concrete context, but I like it too lol. The cliffhanger at the end worked. If I liked the ...
Nov 29, 2016 -
Re: untitled;unknown
Oh wow. I feel you. It's so magical. Wow. This is what I saw in the poem: Someone lonely. Someone unappreciated, someone whose name is not known. Someone unknown. Her ...
Mar 12, 2016 -
Re: Finding Fire
Oh God. This is the kind of masterpiece that makes you go "Holy ****." The writing style flowed so seamlessly and every emphasis was picturesque. The vocabulary was pretty vast ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: Preface
Woah. I thought it was going to be a lil' ol' virus-infection dystopian cliche but this completely blew my mind. A new breed of apocalypse, perhaps? The writing style's tense ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: memorabilia - a rambling
Whoa. Speechless. Wow. That last sentence. Gawd. My heart. This was one hell of a short story, able to bring out the sense of love, happiness and positive feelings as ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: Runs in the Blood (Ch. 1)
jedd the doge here for a review or whatever why do we even need this Woah. That's some cool dialogues you have there. “You know what?” he said. “I propose, ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: When Summer Comes Around
Sorry man I don't mean to sound rude but I thought of this: 1. Describe summer. a) The weather ____________________________________________ b) The condition of your school ____________________________
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Last night I dreamed somebody loved me.
I'd rate it quite average though. It could use more vibrancy like how you relate as love being paint for a heart of canvas. It could use much more throughout ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: In Time
It's magical and the message delivered is quite clear as it is powerful. I can relate, being chained by society, huh? Vivid scenes on how you relate to being free. ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: My ( second) Haikus.
Darn it! (Hey, this is some unnecessary caption of this verse or what I think your opinion is or how this poem is strange in some way but never mind ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Puzzle missing pieces
And I'm just sitting here wondering when was Valentine's Day. It is a cool poem. The emotions are pretty genuine too. I think it's more of a solemn expression of ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Dreadful Waits
Great poem. But one thing I must ask: why do so many poems have to be sad? I guess that that's the time when you're most obliged to write poetry. ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Why Did You Leave Me Like That
Well I think in order for a reader to reach the point where the heart sinks, they need to have someone to relate to. But having read kman134's review...I think ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Psychotic or Psychotic?
Wow. Wow. This is just amazing. I...I can't... This is a whole new world for me. The uniqueness is so good it clawed into my heart, the special - paradigm ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Lost Soul
Hello guys this is my first review hope it won't be too bad though. I'll comment on the overall first. The concept about a lost soul -hmm- interesting. That was ...
Feb 15, 2016
