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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Epilogue to a Story that I May Add More to. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

    Can't really say anything about it as this is an epilogue with concrete context, but I like it too lol. The cliffhanger at the end worked. If I liked the ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: untitled;unknown

    Oh wow. I feel you. It's so magical. Wow. This is what I saw in the poem: Someone lonely. Someone unappreciated, someone whose name is not known. Someone unknown. Her ...

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, General Re: Finding Fire

    Oh God. This is the kind of masterpiece that makes you go "Holy ****." The writing style flowed so seamlessly and every emphasis was picturesque. The vocabulary was pretty vast ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Preface

    Woah. I thought it was going to be a lil' ol' virus-infection dystopian cliche but this completely blew my mind. A new breed of apocalypse, perhaps? The writing style's tense ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: memorabilia - a rambling

    Whoa. Speechless. Wow. That last sentence. Gawd. My heart. This was one hell of a short story, able to bring out the sense of love, happiness and positive feelings as ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Runs in the Blood (Ch. 1)

    jedd the doge here for a review or whatever why do we even need this Woah. That's some cool dialogues you have there. “You know what?” he said. “I propose, ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When Summer Comes Around

    Sorry man I don't mean to sound rude but I thought of this: 1. Describe summer. a) The weather ____________________________________________ b) The condition of your school ____________________________

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Last night I dreamed somebody loved me.

    I'd rate it quite average though. It could use more vibrancy like how you relate as love being paint for a heart of canvas. It could use much more throughout ...

    Feb 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Time

    It's magical and the message delivered is quite clear as it is powerful. I can relate, being chained by society, huh? Vivid scenes on how you relate to being free. ...

    Feb 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My ( second) Haikus.

    Darn it! (Hey, this is some unnecessary caption of this verse or what I think your opinion is or how this poem is strange in some way but never mind ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Puzzle missing pieces

    And I'm just sitting here wondering when was Valentine's Day. It is a cool poem. The emotions are pretty genuine too. I think it's more of a solemn expression of ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreadful Waits

    Great poem. But one thing I must ask: why do so many poems have to be sad? I guess that that's the time when you're most obliged to write poetry. ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Why Did You Leave Me Like That

    Well I think in order for a reader to reach the point where the heart sinks, they need to have someone to relate to. But having read kman134's review...I think ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Art » Realistic, Narrative Re: Psychotic or Psychotic?

    Wow. Wow. This is just amazing. I...I can't... This is a whole new world for me. The uniqueness is so good it clawed into my heart, the special - paradigm ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Lost Soul

    Hello guys this is my first review hope it won't be too bad though. I'll comment on the overall first. The concept about a lost soul -hmm- interesting. That was ...

    Feb 15, 2016


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