Sorry man I don't mean to sound rude but I thought of this:
1. Describe summer.
a) The weather
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b) The condition of your school
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c) The condition of your neighborhood
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2. Make what you have written into a poem.
It's like everything we already know. Nothing special at all. No expressing how you feel at all. Everything was just so...obvious that it felt like some normal statements bundled together rather than a poem.
Keep writing, but I think this needs more thought.
Was I a little mean :0
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