jakobwrites

Hellooo. I only have a few criticisms, and then we can get to the happy stuff! I've already seen others point out the non-capitalized 'I,' so I won't worry about ...

I wish there was more punctuation. It was hard to read, because I felt like it went on and on and on. I really want to enjoy your work but ...

I feel like you're trying to be really poetic. Painfully poetic... Honestly, this just confused me. I understood the first stanza, and that was it. Since this isn't in a ...

Oh my gosh. I know I said I was done reviewing you but... this is me. Literally me. It's nice to have a break from the sad stuff!!! This is ...

I think this is the last review of your work I'll do, so you can stop being bothered with me in your notifications. ^^ The rhythm is my favorite thing ...

Sometimes matters such as virginity can't be described in a sexual way. I like what you've done with this, it makes it seem like the limbs the narrator has been ...

I am in love with this!!! I'm not sure what your metaphorical intentions were with this, but in my eyes this is something sad and desperate. No matter where we ...

This poem was a little confusing the first time I read through it. I had to really think about it and get into the mindset of a drunkard, someone who ...

Hellooo! I'll just get straight to the point; I love how you've taken the cliche of a rose and made it into a question. Poems that end in a question ...

I am so in love with this!!! I've always loved the thought of becoming a star, going up and being one with the galaxy, being recycled back into the universe... ...

This poem is cute, but the rhyme scheme makes the intelligent thoughts in this seem... immature. I'm in love with the idea of it, and sleeping in bed with someone ...

This is honest. I love it. Being in love with someone who doesn't love you back is nothing but waiting, hope and false confidence and waiting... Keeping your composure is ...

I was really hoping for this poem to rhyme. When the first stanza ended up not rhyming, the entire thing seemed to just have long metaphors. It was hard to ...

Especially in the American education system, almost everything seems time-consuming and useless, so procrastination always happens... this poem is spot-on! The rhyme scheme isn't really my forte, but

I won't criticize any grammar, because this seems like a poem you'd read aloud. I love all of the feeling in this poem, and the references to inside jokes. Since ...