I wish there was more punctuation. It was hard to read, because I felt like it went on and on and on. I really want to enjoy your work but I'm just so confused with your style of writing. This gave me a few emotions, but I'm not even sure what they were and now I'm simply confused. This was just one long thing with no stanzas, only one period and almost no capitalization. It was like a long sentence. A confusing sentence. I'm not sure how to criticize the grammar because I was so distracted with the lack of proper punctuation.
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