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Re: YWS Easter Radio Show Transcript
Haha! Awesome job you guys wicked funny! My favortie part: (To Snoink) Yeah? (Pauses.) What is it now? (Pauses.) (Annoyed) So? (Pauses.) Who cares? (Pauses.) Look, I’m trying to do ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: The Life Of A Writer
Hey there! Haha! That really made my day! (Well that and taking my sister down in Walmart :twisted: ) I loved this! I sometimes get this way when I think ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
Oh my God that was absolutely priceless! I love the fact that you made anyone from Twilight a total moron! :lol: So awesomefull! I esp. loved these parts Bella: *pants* ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: The Four Seasons. Ch1
Hey there spike71294! First I'd like to point out that I liked your story! But I noticed some things: I don't care if my vest and my torn denim get ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Musical Personna??? Twilight Characters??? Disney Channel???
Hey there! Haha that was awesome! I loved it!! I noticed 2 things though: *EDWARD disapeares* I believe you mean, disappears And you didn't capitalize some of the beginning of ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Hope - A mother's tale
Hey there PP! I'm Irish! I'm on your team for the game show thing, and let me say, glad to have you onboard! We have an awesome team :D Ok ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Detention
That was pretty funny! I always love your plays Snoink, they're hilarious! But I thought the supervisor was a man? In the script you said it was a woman....or did ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Haha that was EPIC! You killed Jacob and kicked Edward right in the worst place for a dude! Your my idol! Nate and Bella? lol Nate was right to run! ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: A Stranger in Seoul
Hey Mazo! Time for a team critique!! WEE!! Ok here we go! Grammar: This alone was enough to make her an item of interest to Kim Jaejoong's class, and as ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Afternoon Missions
Hey there Hannah! So, I'll first point out grammar, then certain things in the story I noticed, then just overall. My second crack at critique here we go... Grammar: I ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Purple's Hints!
Hah! When I saw the title of this I didn't get it, but now I do! That was funny! Favorite line : Jimmy- It's... (Marie glares at him) Never mind ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Little Macey
Woe :shock: That was really cool! Great job! I only saw one thing that I didn't really understand: They would know that she knew if she did. That doesn't really ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: just gold.
Hey Hannah! So, I really like the poem, as I read it I could slowly see willow trees in my mind and the wind blowing them around. Really beautiful. First ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Love and hurt
Hey there! Welcome to the site Twilightzoner! Alrighty, so I think you have a really good plot here! I really liked it and I'm interested to see what happens, but ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
:lol: I love it! I love all your scripts, they're just awesome! My favorite line in the entire thing: RANDOM GUY 2 I’m still alive! DANNY Shut up! Love it! ...
Jul 24, 2009
