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Hi Sabershark21, here for a review! Personally, I'm a huge fantasy fan, and this story seems right up my alley. I found your MC, Andrus, to have a lot of ...

Hi JennyImStory, here for a review! So I'm not quite sure if this is the first installment in what looks to be a series, but I will give my first ...

Hi ashlingwolf, here for a quick review! So let's jump right in then, shall we? For starters, that first sentence really had me intrigued: She's going to kill me. She's ...

Hey Junel, here for a review! I see that you've actually written quite a bit in this series, and since I didn't want to start reading in the middle of ...

Really great first chapter! The description in the beginning is very well-done, and although this is a short chapter I already have a feel for most of your characters. Malanka ...

Hi themightierpen, here to review your short story! First things first, I hardly saw any grammar mistakes, which is great because I could concentrate totally on the story. That said, ...

Woah. I'm not quite sure if I can properly review this, because damn. It was good. I don't think I've ever been as intrigued by a prologue before. The writing, ...

Hey YDRyan, here to give a little review. I thought that your characters were quite dynamic, and I sense that there are a great many things that readers will find ...

Hi felistia, this prologue sets up for what I believe will be a great story! Your descriptions are well-written, and the start of your conflict is already unfolding. I can ...

Hi, MemeQueen. You have a story that has a lot of potential here! The beginning is attention-grabbing and urges readers to keep reading, which is of course crucial to a ...

Really great imagery you conjured up, especially towards the end. I find it interesting how you used only pronouns and decided to omit the names of your characters. It makes ...

Hiya! So I found this short story really intriguing. The main character is a female knight, which I absolutely love. But unfortunately, that's all readers really know about her. Maybe ...

Woah. I'm going to start off by saying that this poem, and the message that you conveyed through it, was very clear and thought-provoking. I would say that this poem ...

Wow, really great humor! I can tell that Hercules has a wonderfully sarcastic personality, of which I have a great admiration. If I can offer a few suggestions, it would ...

So I'm guessing that this series is going to be a high fantasy (elves!), which is totally up my alley. I highly enjoyed the beginning (I have a weak spot ...