indieeloise

Gotcha. So wait where's my bagel

what even

smooth ^^

Ah. I must've missed that! Hopefully I'm not too brutal. I hope you know it's inspired by my respect for your poetry, which is brutally honest in itself.

On a side note - why was this rated for language? I noticed nothing that needed to be censored in this.

I can see what you mean by preachy. I think it's fine as it is; it makes it a little more personal. I was just wondering what you thought about ...

I loved the "Soul" part - I wasn't pointing out anything wrong about it! And I know exactly what you mean by writing things half-asleep, haha. I wake up all ...

No problem! I still think about this poem, and that's when you know you've read a good one :)

Oh, goodness. Something happened to my quotations and apostrophes. My apologies!

Sorry the formatting in the quotes isn't the best, it was my first time trying it out - but I think you get the point I'm getting across!

No problem! :)

Thanks so much for your input! I'll definitely work with it and see what I can do. :)

I will definitely play around with the enjambment - thanks so much for the tips on this, your advice on starting/ending emphasis will be kept in mind! Thank you for ...

Oh goodness! I didn't realize the format mishap until you mentioned it - I will fix that, thanks! Thank you so much for your review - very helpful! I will ...

Well, first of all, welcome! Thank you for the review!