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This reminds me of a slow jazz rap performance, saxophone in the background and people snapping at the end instead of clapping. I don't know what the English assignment was ...

At first it make it sound like its a rant to try and get over a thunderstorm while it was happening, but you threw a curve when comparing the sound ...

I liked the way that the words are chosen and written almost like a legend passed down and written in old tattered books. its another way to look at the ...

very nice. I would love to visit my linage country but Turkey isnt at the best of relations as of right now. My father would go to the Mediterranean sea ...

"where the feathers have molted away to grim","but you will always be the penguin slayer." It went from childhood to advertising propaganda to killing penguins. hmmm. random and yet it ...

omg. this sounds like it was a conversation you had in real life, but how can you think of so many random things to put together? i know i am ...

hmmm... this is kinda loving and depressing at the same time. but it also sounds like every teens mind that has gone through school with the thought of finding love, ...

I like the jumping form character to character. the suspense was good and the character development is good. i have noticed that most people tend to spend more time on ...

its really heard to read when the paragraphs are soooo long. though i do like this idea but it was done in a odd way. i know that the entire ...

i loved the beginning but to me the result was a bit obvious. there are so many ways that could have been just besides a gun to the head. i ...

Its a little slow for me but then again i love action and movement and hate conversations, other wise i did like this. there are a few errors but i ...

I cant wait fir the next one. I liked this piece. i loved the emotions and the way you described the actions of each person. I could help but to ...

YAY!!! REview TIme!!!...111!!! that was really depressing. you need to reread your work out loud and you will find most of the errors and fragments. I like the Deepness of ...

I have mixed feelings about this one. i liked it because it is a different concept that i have never seen before. using a human voice to describe the creating ...

I loved this so much. :) . The song, the idea. though there are a few errors i dont care. the song is a great touch and flows so nicely. ...