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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Monachopsis | Chapter Three: Driftel (2/2)

    I want to apologize straight away. I did not read the prequel to this, therefore I was thoroughly confused the entire time I was reading this. For that reason, I ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't Hide From All Their Smiles

    This was beautiful. I really can't describe how lovely it was to read something uplifting about depression, rather than a poem about how "sorrowful I feel." The lines "A trench ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: The Kingly Mammal

    I really liked this! I'm going to assume you were referring to a Bengal tiger, for the sake of the rest of this review. Tigers are truly beautiful creatures, and ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: txting with girlfriend

    This was absolutely adorable. It actually gave me a couple cavities from how sweet it was. I love how playful the boyfriend is, trying to rhyme with everything she says. ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Bottom of the Bottle

    I really enjoyed this. It's very simple, and incredibly poignant. I have expirience with abusive relationships and addiction, so it hit a very raw place inside of me. I do ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: Crazy Minds

    One of the issues I have with this story is that I feel as though it was meant to read by someone who was already familiar with the characters. I ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Historical Fiction Re: Genghis and Galileo Take Miami

    You are amazing!!!!! Seriously!!! I am a huge history buff, so to find a humorous historical piece that's actually accurate is like finding the Holy Grail wrapped in the Invisibility ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Eating - The Hidden Fatal Side

    I love this! It's not about love, or loss, or depression, or anything deep. It's just about a proper diet! It's well-written, informational, and it rhymes beautifully. Honestly, I've never ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Wonder Why I Hadn't Cried

    This is very sweet. I also didn't cry for my grandmother right away, so it hits a tender spot for me. If I can be so bold as to suggest ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.

    This is quite beautiful. I love the simplicity and the raw honesty of it. I'm not a huge fan of really flowery poetry, so this is perfect to me. I ...

    Sep 6, 2014


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price