icebender28

Oh wow. This is amazing! It's so twisted, and I feel really bad for the Lady Gridelin. Your writing skills are fantastic, by the way. "But she had lit all ...

I liked it! It didn't really make sense though, sorry. I didn't find any mistakes, but the flow seemed very jumpy. Once again, sorry. It's nice and tells an interesting ...

Hey there! :) I really loved this, you did a great job! You gave me a different way of looking at words! I don't think I found any spelling or ...

Hi there! I really liked this. It was really good. Nice job describing things, and I loved the unique names you picked out for the people and places. And when ...

I liked it! I really liked the irony you put in it, it was hilarious. And, i completely understand, writers block. It is so annoying, right? Anyways, I thought you ...

I liked it! The confusing-ness worked for me, actually, and the off-flow kind of flowed, if that makes sense. It made me laugh a little bit, because I got so ...

I liked it! You caught me at the begining, and then talk about a mood swing! And then you got really violent! I was like "Holy cow!"(Excuse my weird way ...

Okay, so I'm gonna start with stuff I didn't really like(which are few, by the way) so that my reveiw will end on a good note! The flow of the ...

This was really good! You did a really good job setting up an image in my head, and nice choice of words! The flow didn't really...flow...I guess. It still was ...

This was a really good poem! And for the record, I actually liked the flow! It was choppy, like thoughts, so it was kind of like reading somebody's mind. I ...

I really liked it Blue! The beggining was catching and was very good, but i didn't really get the end. The flow of the words didn't really work. But it ...

Hey Blue! I really liked this poem! It grabbed my attention very quickly, and you did a very good job with metaphors. The flow of the words was great, it ...

Wow, violent. I really liked it! It was kind of confusing at first, but i like how you wrote from the point of veiw that you did. It was an ...

That was an amazing, emotional peice of work. I kept on thinking it was going to have a happy ending, which made it even more sad. You really wrnched my ...

I really liked it. i like how you compared people to glass and talked about how they can break easily, and how if they fall than there can be someone ...