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Hey, Laelle! I think you've got a pretty good thing going on here. I like the way you structured it; it reads like a speech, but is built like a ...

Wow, you've got some great descriptions here. I'm jealous. But I agree with the reviewer below me. Even though your descriptions are pretty awesome, some parts are still kind of ...

Hey there, Lily! Happy review day! So I actually enjoyed reading this. Really. I liked how you opened up the story with great mystery to who the characters are and ...

Hey there, Lemisa! So this was a pretty sweet story, but I do see some room for improvement. First of all, I was a little confused with the dialogue and ...

Whoa, this was good. I really liked your use of imagery throughout the piece. You were able to paint such clear images of what went on and what she's going ...

Hey there! Nice story you've got here. I know that you wrote in your description that there were probably some mistakes, so I tried to look past those a little ...

Hey there! So I think you've got a good idea going here, but I think it would've been better if you had executed it properly. What I mean by that ...

This is honestly pretty good! I don't think I have anything to nitpick about it, so I guess I'll just inflate your head with praise. Sounds good? I loved the ...

Alright, so, I'm kind of jealous right now since you're able to make something so simple like walking through a snowstorm something interesting to read. Seriously. I've been wanting to ...

Hey there! So I see the reviewer before me already pointed out some things, but I since I saw you're working on chapter two I thought I'd point out some ...

Hey there! So this was pretty interesting. I mean, your opening line surely hooked me right in, but I'm sorry to say that I found myself lost by the end. ...