hudz96

Oh my Lord. You made me cry... I am like sobbing my heart out. It was simply beautiful. *wipes eyes* I would never change a single word in this. Is ...

Dont get offended please! and Over all I really enjoyed your poem :D You just need to get better at compiling it all together.

GAH i just realized that its hard to make sense of what iv written at all!!! just ignore iht!

aww... man thats just plain depressing... but at the same time i like it... not that im saying I like what your meaning in it..... the meaning is sad.... :( ...

AHHHHHH!!! read iht to Julzzz!!! I love it... especially since you have mentioned snow in MY perspective... dude this change is making me love you more and more and more. ...

:'( My god you have written the most heart moving Poem EVER!!!!! I LOVE IHT!!! its beautiful. Love Hudz X

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WOW. You are an amazing writer, the way you make your characters and make everything so confusing and pile Questions and Questions on top of each other just by reading ...

Awwww I loved this. You are an amazing writer. Im not much for critiques though so you will have to wait for someone else for those. :D

Hello, I like your poem its short, sweet, and simple. Just one thing i picked up You are picturing Paradise, You are running, Away from the world Away from the ...

OOO i love it... I always say this. *rolls eyes* but i love it all the same. Just like Anna said; another beautiful Poem of yours. This time I'm glad ...

HAHAHAHAHA Oh my god that's so funny. I know what its like i have 5 other siblings apart from me. Trust me as soon as we enter the house from ...

thank you but actually the whole point was for it to be perfect first, then become unbearably sweet, and then by that time its too late and snap... that's the ...

OH MY GOD your going to give me nightmares!!!!!!!!! That was SO SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gosh brrrr, its freaky and awesome, in a very freaky scary way......

Ahh i love it TUCK!!!!!!!!!! don't stop writing... and i will wait for the rest... i want it first. Oh and i didn't do anymore editing, because i think no ...