horseswrite

First I want to say, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here so far and finding everyone's input very helpful. On to your poem. I totally agree what ...

Wow, this is really great! Please, Please, PLEASE write more! The only thing I have to say is that there was a lot of times where there were run-on sentences ...

Hi! This is Horseswrite here for a Review on Review Day! Oh my gosh!! this is an amazing poem! I have nothing really wrong to say here! I love how ...

This is Horseswrite here for a review on Review day!! Wow! i really like your poem! I love the flow and the rhythm and it's really smooth. I just have ...

Woah, you are a really good writer!! i read your 1st chapter, and i like how it flows!! It also makes a lot of sense which I love!! wow, there ...

This is a really good story and you have a very unique writing style! I do have to say some things. Well, I would like some more description, of the ...

Wow, this is really good and you are so right. I love the flow of your poem and it makes sense and is very easy to relate to. There is ...

This is a really good poem! I like how you describe the things you want to do and accomplish this summer! I do have a few suggestions though. First off, ...

Wow! this is an amazing poem! I love how you describe time! I do have some little things to say though. When you say: "Time will go one, but you ...

I love this poem! It has a lot of meaning and passion! I love how you write! I love your description! how you wrote that, "Instead of tears of joy ...

Oh my gosh! This is an amazing poem! It shows how you feel about this modern world. I love your descriptions! Your poems are amazing, better than any poem I ...

I really love your poem! Your repetition of the word "I dream" stresses that you are an active dreamer! I noticed thought that you said the same line twice which ...

This is an amazing poem and it was very touching! I like your details! It is very vivid and I love it! There are just some lines that don't make ...

I love this poem! It is very short and sweet, but it expresses lots of meaning! I like that you described how this poem would last forever if you kept ...

Wow! First i have to say, great job! This is an amazing poem that feels like someone speaking. I like that quality, instead of it being something like redundant rhyming. ...