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lol. I really liked it. It really hooks you into the story. Seems like you know your character well. "No this isn’t one of those over told fluffy, bubble gum ...

I actually liked it. It didn't make me think of Kelly Clarkson. I thought the storyline as really good. One spelling mistake "Kids and teachers getting *hre* down" probably just ...

Cool. This is really catchy. I agree that it could use another verse,but otherwise I really enjoyed it. It kind of made me think of Paramore. "Burn the Flame I ...

I really enjoyed this. I would totally listen to this song. the lyrics kind of made me think of some of Nickelback's deeper songs ( If you don't like Nickelback, ...

WOW.That was such a sad and beautifull story. Is a true story? This is defenently one of the best narrative poems i have ever read. The story is so real. ...

awww, that was sweet. Sounded more like a personal experience that a character, but that's how most poetry should be."Watch the stars by night time and I promise by the ...

I thought that was really cool. was it about having a crush on your best guy friend or something? eventually going out with him maby? "I'm crazed over a stupid ...

Wow, i could really see the emotion and anger coming through the lyrics. This would make a great song. I really like the way the music is supposed to sound.This ...

Again this is really good. It dosn't seem like a country song though, a little more rock.probably because of the elecrtic quitar part. The lyrics are kind of country though. ...

I like this poem. it's honest and relatible, and those are always the best kinds of poems. The only thing i had trouble with is this line "You told me ...

This was really good. "We were perfect,We were this poem. in love.We made mistakes, And we gave up.I have no regrets,But what about you?" those are great and relatible lines. ...

Wow! not a songwritter? this was great. I can really hear how i would make this song sound. i dissagre with lordgluzman, i hear the beat in my head. but ...

WOW! This is defenently one of the best poem i've ever read on the subject of cutting and depression. It was really amazing. I especially loved the last for Stanzas, ...

"Every step a deathly struggle,Each breath a driving force,No one to help with the journey,A life filled with remorse.A glinting knife a warm invite," This is my favorite part of ...

"The border must not be crossed It must stay real and true, without complications Because the truth is;There is no future beyond this line There never was.Stay on track and ...