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I thought this was really cute, very relatable. It was short, and with more work I think it could have a more powerful effect and be brilliant! Other than that ...

Hey! I absolutely loved this. I can always tell when I really like lyrics is when I wish I could hear the music played with them! Love and all that ...

This is simply brilliant. I was nearly moved to tears when I read it. It's people like you who change the world one step at a time. I thank you ...

Hey! I really liked this. It kind of had a "Dear John" feel to it, and maybe that is just because I'm in the middle of reading that book ha ...

I have no intentions of portraying a Julius Caesar essence here, but there is a forum dedicated to lyrics. I would put this there, because it is simply brilliant. I ...

Hey! 1st off welcome to YWS. 2nd, I absolutely loved this! It was short and sweet. The little bird concept was very relatable, which is always great in poetry. I ...

Hey! Welcome to YSW. Nit-picks. I don't feel that every line has to be capitalized and/or end with a period. Some lines can just end with a comma or the ...

Hey! Now this, this poem is really deep. Most people (including myself) write a lot of things that don't really challenge a serious subject. This could arise a lot of ...

I really liked this. I have to disagree and say that I loved the last line. Though this part may be my favorite: No one told me how much I ...

Hey! I completely loved this poem and all of it's dramaticness? (pretend that's a word) The ending really caught me off guard, and I totally loved it. I'm not really ...

I absolutely loved this. I've written a lot of (sucky) poems on leaving, but someone being pulled back in. I never really new how to execute it properly without sounding ...

Hey Snoink! Thanks for the review on my last poem. As you know could probably tell, I don't know much about poetry (just an aspiring writer.) So, here is what ...

I'm going to keep this short and to the point like your poem (which I loved by the way :) I completely love this. Totally describes this guy I fell ...