hermione315

This is beautiful. Your imagery is flawless. I'm speechless.

Thanks for your helpful review! :D

Like you supposed, I was meaning for this to mock cliche romance stories, but the main purpose for writing it was to get a laugh out of the reader by ...

What I meant by "three months" was that Max had been sneaking the frosting bit by bit from her secret stash for that long and over that period of time ...

Thanks for your advice! :)

In some versions of fantasy stories I've heard, elves are shape-shifters, and that's the type of elf I'm going for in my story. Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review! You pointed out a lot of little things that need addressed, and I do believe I will try rewriting this in first person so that it ...

This review was extremely helpful. Thank you!

This review was extremely helpful. Thank you!

Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review! The part that says 'sticky amber lies' pretty much means that there is flecks of amber in the person's olive green eyes, and the other person ...

Oops, I didn't know someone had already said that. But I'm glad I could help! :)

Thanks for the review, Pompadour! I agree with you on the fact that I use way too many adjectives; it's a habit I've been trying to fight for a long ...

Thank you! This was very helpful.

Thanks for your review!