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Re: Ode to Donald Trump
Hello Odd! Hermione here for a quick review. I thought this poem was right on point, and you made me laugh with the line that said "his mane flies and ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: Time,time
Hi! Hermione here for a quick review! I, like mialynire, think this will make a neat song. I especially liked your chorus. It was catchy, and it had a great ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: The Creativity Epidemic
Hi! Hermione here for a review. I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked how the narrator's ridiculous ideas for banning music, art, and dancing led to the human race becoming ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: My Crush
Hi kratos17! Hermione here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you find this site useful, and if you have any questions, don't be afraid to ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: The Darkest of Dreams- Chapter 1
Hey! Hermione here for a review! This was an interesting beginning to a novel, and it definitely got me hooked and left me wanting to read more. As your last ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Break my Heart
Hello ChocolateCello! Hermione here for a quick review. I loved this poem because of its relatability. The last two stanzas particularly rang true to me, and I thought they were ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: 1 Too early might as well be worse than too late
Hello Lorelie! Hermione here as requested. Sorry it took me so long. I really enjoyed this first chapter of yours, and I’m excited to see where you’ll take this idea. ...
Aug 25, 2015 -
Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.0]
Hello Lightsong! Hermione here as requested. I like this first chapter; it presents a lot of unanswered questions that make me want to keep reading. Normally, I wouldn’t advise starting ...
Aug 17, 2015 -
Re: Fly Free
Hello! Hermione here for a short review! This poem has a sweet message to it. It's positive, optimistic, and inspirational, which is the kind of poetry I love to read. ...
Aug 16, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 3
Hello Yizhongt! Sorry it took me so long to get you a review on this piece. I went away to summer camp and when I got home I simply forgot. ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: When The Dragons Attack
Hi wisegirl22! This is Hermione here for a review. Hey, that rhymed! :) I thought this poem was very playful and sweet, but I saw a few parts where you ...
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: Two Shades of Black
Hello Rydia! Hermione here for The Big Review! I enjoyed how fast-paced and action-packed this story was. The description of the three people in your first paragraph is very intriguing, ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 2
Hello! Hermione here as requested. I enjoyed this chapter much more than I did your first. The plot of your story is really starting to build, and it’s getting more ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Perfection ( EDITED)
Hello! Hermione here as requested. I like the idea behind this poem, I'm just not sure that you delivered it in a very effective way. Poems can be written in ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit: Chapter 1: Odd Dream
Hello! Hermione here for Rydia’s Big Review Contest! So far this story sounds really interesting. I’m really impressed that you were able to get it published! I would love to ...
Jul 8, 2015