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Hello Odd! Hermione here for a quick review. I thought this poem was right on point, and you made me laugh with the line that said "his mane flies and ...

Hi! Hermione here for a quick review! I, like mialynire, think this will make a neat song. I especially liked your chorus. It was catchy, and it had a great ...

Hi! Hermione here for a review. I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked how the narrator's ridiculous ideas for banning music, art, and dancing led to the human race becoming ...

Hi kratos17! Hermione here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you find this site useful, and if you have any questions, don't be afraid to ...

Hey! Hermione here for a review! This was an interesting beginning to a novel, and it definitely got me hooked and left me wanting to read more. As your last ...

Hello ChocolateCello! Hermione here for a quick review. I loved this poem because of its relatability. The last two stanzas particularly rang true to me, and I thought they were ...

Hello Lorelie! Hermione here as requested. Sorry it took me so long. I really enjoyed this first chapter of yours, and I’m excited to see where you’ll take this idea. ...

Hello Lightsong! Hermione here as requested. I like this first chapter; it presents a lot of unanswered questions that make me want to keep reading. Normally, I wouldn’t advise starting ...

Hello! Hermione here for a short review! This poem has a sweet message to it. It's positive, optimistic, and inspirational, which is the kind of poetry I love to read. ...

Hello Yizhongt! Sorry it took me so long to get you a review on this piece. I went away to summer camp and when I got home I simply forgot. ...

Hi wisegirl22! This is Hermione here for a review. Hey, that rhymed! :) I thought this poem was very playful and sweet, but I saw a few parts where you ...

Hello Rydia! Hermione here for The Big Review! I enjoyed how fast-paced and action-packed this story was. The description of the three people in your first paragraph is very intriguing, ...

Hello! Hermione here as requested. I enjoyed this chapter much more than I did your first. The plot of your story is really starting to build, and it’s getting more ...

Hello! Hermione here as requested. I like the idea behind this poem, I'm just not sure that you delivered it in a very effective way. Poems can be written in ...

Hello! Hermione here for Rydia’s Big Review Contest! So far this story sounds really interesting. I’m really impressed that you were able to get it published! I would love to ...