herbgirl

Hey! i don't have enough criticism for a full review, but i just wanted to let you know, i LOVE this! Your imagery is fantastically employed! Keep up the good ...

Hey babe. i don't usually respond to reviews, but i wanted to say this little thing before i forget. Sometimes in my poems, i like to say things that mix ...

i forgot to say, but capitalize your title! It will seem more professional.

wow, apparantly my own work doesn't even want to be publieshed! it's fixed now, but don't read it, obviously it's not worth it

wow, apparantly my own work doesn't even want to be publieshed! it's fixed now, but don't read it, obviously it's not worth it

i don't think the word "within" quite works there, it makes me wonder 'within what?' i think you should use the word therein, because it shows where the joyous dancing ...

Sounds good to me! And the format looks great now! As for "Bringing earth a slice of Heaven", you could say "Finding joy therein", i feel as if that would ...

The ending is kind of meant to be confusing. The goal was to mix up those three major senses (tears from the eyes obscure sight, mouth, hearing) to show how ...

Ok, I wanted to give you a review, but honestly, this is fantastic! You encompass so much in such a short piece, ad you manage to really pull the reader ...

Thank you for the review! I just wanted to add that another reason that I chose to write the bulk of the story as a flashback was so that the ...

Well, the word due actually means a variety of things, the closest to that being "of the proper quality or extent; adequate." So maybe that word could be adjusted. Also, ...

This is awesome! I'm glad Hamilton inspired you it inspires me too, but the message is also really impressive. I feel like many people can relate to you, and you ...

Ok, again with the "i"s. In this case, this is a different series of poems, in which I never capitilize my "i"s, it's meant to emphasize my insignificance. I was ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! I wanted to clarify on a few points. First, since I didn't use capitilization in any other places, I didn't want to use it only ...

Hey! Just wanted to clarify, I didn't capitalize on purpose. I'm doing a series of poems with non-traditional formatting, and none of them have capitalization, sort of as an homage ...