Hey!! Just popping in for a small review. I really loved the imagery in this poem, and even though I usually don't like this style of poem, I liked the way this one was done. I don't think another style would be as effective.
On the negative, I would have changed the comma in line eleven to a period, and then capitalized the A that comes after it.
Honestly, that's the only thing I would change, and it's really a matter of opinion. I really liked the poem, all in all. Keep up the good work!
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