herbgirl

Ummmm..... Am I missing something? I don't see anything here. On the other hand, this poem was sweet thoughtful, and very outright. I only found a few spelling mistakes towards ...

I like how you kind of have the two people talking in the first 2 stanzas. it sounds kind of cool. you also say rumors are part of life. That ...

Okay, this story was kind of like a roller coaster. Here's a few reasons why: First, you here that the man has a grip on her soul. Then, you here ...

This is a good poem. I like it. I can kind of relate with what this poem says, about how failure is always around. Do you get this feeling often, ...

I like this poem. It tells a story in a promise. kind of sweet. But i'm kind of confused about that last part. Does it mean the girl will ignore ...

Okay, did I miss the beginning of the story? There was a spelling mistake, but only one, and I already forgot what it was. So, obviously, it wasn't that important. ...

I liked this story, but I'm kind of confused. How old is this girl supposed to be? Is the girl staying with her uncle, or is she renting a cabin ...

This is a great epilogue. It kind of tells you what happened to them, shows you that both the characters survived. Once again I love the the descriptions of the ...

I think this poem is okay. AS I was reading it a pictured a sky at sunset, a massive blue wave, and a child standing alone, looking over it all ...

I LOVE THIS STORY! It is very adventerous and really pulls you in. I felt almost as if I was in the cold right along with them. I thought that ...

Like Racket, I enjoyed this poem too! It is really funny. But I also agree with her when she says it was kind of hard to tell who was talking. ...

The way you write your poems you make it so people can go along for the ride of the beginning and the middle of the story. Then you get the ...