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I remember that you said that you were going to try and adapt the dream you had into a poem, story and drawing (The drawing is where you said it) ...

Defitently my style, morbid humor, love it. I thought this was original and funny. "“I love you,” she said Her voice coming out in Sweet clumps of cotton candy" Sweet ...

Oh my gosh, that was great. You could smell, feel, hear everything that was going on. 'twas great Sam :D And areida, I've read the whole thing put together and ...

*mouth drops open* that was the best poem i've ever read on here. I love it its so easy to read and the imagry was so good and the way ...

I don't really like this story, their wasn't really much of an intro to this. Always try to make the first paragraph grab your readers, your first paragraph, although well ...

I don't know how to explain what reaction this poem gave me, it was refreshing almost. I like the format very much. And the ending: "Goodnight memories Wake up clear ...

You do use the word 'Grey' alot but like you said that was kind of the whole point, and I hink titiling 'The Sea Of Gray' made that more apparent. ...

Same with what Matt said about the missing some commas, and their was also one place where it was awkward to read: "We sat there for what seemed like hours, ...

I really like this but I agree with Mesh and Jack, thoguh. And this sentence right here: "The girl, slightly annoyed, puts asider her needle and sampler." I think you ...

I think Jermey sounds alot diffrent then Luke, I could tell that that wasn't Luke speaking, even though you said it at the top :P lol (skunk go BOOM!) this ...

I don't know if this has already been said on this thread, sorry to lazy to read every long post of theroys, but I think Harry is the 7th Horcrux ...

I LOVE IT! you explain everything so well Sam, but you need to work on the rhyming a little. In a few places it sounded very forced. "and the schoolboy ...

I really like this. I don't think you really need to expand on it because it doesn't really seem to be about anyone, just a "short random dark depressing little ...

I like this, alot. I reilize this isn't the best written story but for some reason I really enjoyed it. This sounds almost like a journal entry, you know? because ...

Ok, this SOOOOO needs formating!!! This is how it should be: J: Ah, Saskatchewan. (Snffs)a beautiful land...dense rainforests, friendly natives, cute little monkeys that swi- ( jabs J) S: Hello, ...