Woah, you must be psychic...I was about to go on MSN and bother you into reading it. 
Anyway, thanks!
I shall...my musket knowledge isn't that great...'the gun is fully cocked' would work perfectly. Thanks dudes/dudettes!
Dang.
Good gravy, Sam, that was one of your greatest Hourglasses. The only nitpick I have is that the beginning seemed a bit too contemporary, but I'm not really sure how you could change that... hmm. Oh well. It's not bad or anything.
You should put all these together on her; it'd be cool to read 'em all at once. How many pages is this thing now? 
Woah, you must be psychic...I was about to go on MSN and bother you into reading it. Anyway, thanks!
I shall...my musket knowledge isn't that great...'the gun is fully cocked' would work perfectly. Thanks dudes/dudettes!
Because you described the click of the gun! See? That implies modern rifles, not muskets. Or blunderbusses.
oh.. tension. I could stand a bit more, honestly.
(and I thought i had read everything I wanted to from when I was gone, but you snuck hourglass in there! yay!).
What Snoink said about the gun. yes. I was taken back when I read this, and was like "is this still the same hourglass?"
Second to last line.. nice.
if only i could remember where you were last with this (yes, my memory is that bad, unless I missed more than I thought).
Yeah i finally get a chance to read it. Sorry it took so long but...anyways. I liked it and agree that it is the best post of Hourglass that you've written. I can't wait to read more to see what is going to happen. Good job!!
Pretty amazing. The way you described It...It was If I was there. I could smell, feel, hear everything(as someone else already said). I liked It, a lot. You really have a lot of potential! I can't believe you're only twelve! 
Wow...
The last one I read, he was going to kiss someone...
Now he's somewhere else... With blood...
Wow... I need to keep up with the time.
YAY SNOINKY SNOINKY OINKY OINKY!
Thankus. I didn't even notice that...
Thanks for reading, guys!
wow sam. I didn't get this because i haven't read the previous ones recently. *pants, running to read the others*
I know why it seemed contemporary! *waves hand in the air*
Because you described the click of the gun! See? That implies modern rifles, not muskets. Or blunderbusses. But really... I would use a sword if I were in their place.
*smirks* I should get an award...
Oh my gosh, that was great. You could smell, feel, hear everything that was going on.
'twas great Sam
And areida, I've read the whole thing put together and its great like that. I haven't read it with the new stuff though, should be better.
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