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It is horrible, and No problem, haha thanks :D I didn't realize it was poetic XD

Wow thanks for the advice! I really do appreciate it. :D I'm glad you thought it was different and enjoyed it, that's always a great thing to hear. Anyways I'll ...

Wow thanks! :D I'm glad you loved it. Rock on! :D

Haha your welcome! And I will :D Thanks!

Thanks for the advice, It truly did help :D I'll be editing it as soon as I can.

Wow thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this short story, and it was very helpful of you for editing. I always had this habit of having too many punctuations, or less. ...

I was thinking the same with adding a comma after the 5th, but I wasn't so sure XD. I'm glad you enjoyed and I'll jump into my edits, and continue ...

Thank you, and I will edit everything. I'm really glad you enjoyed this! :D

No problem! :D

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you got the chilling vibe, that's always my goal. Anyways thanks for the constructive criticism it really helped, and I'm sorry for the odd sentence ...

Thank you so much that honestly helped a lot! :D

Thank you that really helped a lot! And don't feel horrible :D Rock on!

Thank you for reading and critiquing, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am most likely going to make this into a book. Thanks again! :D

Ha ha yeah, and also no problem I'll be reading chapter 3 soon, and thanks! :D

Thanks a lot Sherri! My teacher I think was worried she asked if I was alright XD and I will definitely tell you when I have other writings coming Thanks ...