heavymetal247

Your poem it was really heart clenching, it's filled with a type of bliss and sorrow weaved together to make something I don't think I've never even felt. Your imagery ...

Wow just wow... you're imagery was breath taking, and the personification is so flawless my heart nearly punched through my chest... (sorry disturbing O_O) Any ways I love how you ...

You have great imagery flooding through every line of your poem. I love how some poets write something the reader can relate to, It can be the most made up, ...

So short and sweet, yet with a flood of emotions. Your diction is flawless it almost tears me to shreds. (A bit awkward if I do say so myself XD) ...

I enjoyed the poem, school is pretty chaotic and a pain, you have just got to drag yourself through it all. I only saw so far one grammatical mistake "witch ...

My heart just fell into a bottomless pit, your writing is flawless and beautiful. I love stories like yours, it kind of reminds me of a book I read last ...

Extremely creative. I'm not a fan of Disney since they all seem to have the same story of some sort which bores me, but you kept it real, intriguing, and ...

Really good work, a bit hard to read, but it was great. The only suggestion I have is spacing, or breaking it into stanzas. Lots of sad emotions poured out ...

Wow this poem is amazing, it had awoken something within me that I never knew was there. It's unclear which in my opinion is good, I know that may seem ...

Beautifully written, I felt a connection something I can relate to. I honestly never read something about smiles being the liar, which I love because it's completely true. Smiles are ...

Beautiful, it was like cradling yourself beneath a cloak of basic reality. I love how in the beginning you transitioned from this somewhat brooding girl; who seems uninterested to read, ...