heavymetal247

Ha ha I enjoyed this greatly, I hate Disney movies they're just a big ball of crap in my eyes. (and they are all the same, where's the unhappy endings.) ...

Nailed personification perfectly, how you describe betrayal is exactly how I would describe it. I love how you start with "the thing about betrayal" It caught my attention quickly, it ...

Eeek! It's finally here! Can I tell you something? You're chapter is amazing! And I'm craving for more my friend... It's like my taste buds is desiring candy (Not a ...

Wow romantic I see... well you struck me hard in the face. This is written very well the metaphors and imagery are beautifully flawless. My favorite part was when you ...

This poem is so short and straight to the point, but it makes the reader and laugh. I'm not a fan of comedic poems only certain ones catches my eye, ...

Your poem was very consuming, and filled with so much sorrow that it literally tugged and stole my heart away from me. And I really adore how you always refer ...

This was very beautiful. I adore imagery, and you did it so well! :D Sparkling foam covers the surface of my dreams and they are deep enough for me to ...

So beautiful, the imagery is just incredibly breath taking, it has a somewhat gloomy setting (if I'm correct) But anything dark, or gloomy, is truly more beautiful than light burning ...

Holy hell! My type of poem! It's darkly delicious (my type of meal XD) This was amazing, it's like you had took the exact definition of love from my thoughts, ...

How exciting another poem I can relate to, one of my favorites. Anyways! Beautiful diction, your word choice was simple yet amazing, not so complex, which most writers tend to ...

Your personification is flawless, i love and the waves of pain sleep inside, like a raging river, angry and afraid; it is almost like a sea of sorrow, That's amazing ...

This was amazingly interesting (the ending especially made me smile.) I'm guessing this was a confidence boost kind of poem (but instead by criticizing and humor I love that technique), ...

Holy! I'm excited please tell me your going to continue this. I just love how it somewhat fills you in with the story, but it won't answer all your question ...

Your story was yanking at the heartstrings I never knew I held, It was sorrowfully beautiful. When I read this letter, I felt a massive connection with the two characters. ...

Your poem is honest, sorrowful, yet beautiful. It shows the truth behind people themselves really. When you're with someone for a long while, and all of a sudden they have ...