heavymetal247

I haven't read your other parts that goes along with this story of yours, but I really like it so far even though I may be lost in the sauce ...

Hello there! I'm here to review your astounding story, I'm not really a grammar freak, because can ever be perfect with their grammar, and plus if you read it aloud ...

"'At the sight of the gun, the strange man standing atop the stone and earthen embankment, and the glint of the sun on metal, I reeled. Death was upon me, ...

The first stanza was a beauty to read, it was like I took a stroll in the meadows as the sun glimmered upon me. (and trust me I'm not that ...

Before I read the actual poem, I of course read the title Photographs of Extinct Species, the first thing that popped up in my head was the passenger pigeons, who ...

I only have one word for this LOVE! I was mind blown (first off) about how long this poem, but that's alright I love to read (second) It was heart ...

The ending was perfect, short and straight to the point, it didn't leave the reader hanging with questions swimming in their heads, which is a great job on your part! ...

(Your Icon picture cracks me up! XD) Anyways *coughs* back on track. I really like this, it's well organized, and also how it's set up, first you write about well ...

Well I in my opinion really like your story so far. The swearing is not a big deal in my world, swearing is all over my books (it just creates ...

This is really clever I would have never thought of that :D! Using song lyrics, yet twisting it with your poetic style, amazing! I would love to read more of ...

Amazing just amazing *Applause* The darkness chases us all, with outstretched arms.(Great personification right here) Cackling with the joy of our fear. (Cackling great word choice) Chills just went d

This poem is intriguing, "I cannot handle failure." Definitely caught my eye. I see so many teens at my high school, be worshiped like there freaking gods, but once someone ...

Once again light you impressed me with you beautiful metaphors, and hair raising imagery. I fell in love with every word, every picture you had drawn for us readers. It ...

I like how you wrote this to get rid of your writers block, and called this struggle. That's amazing. I get that sometimes with some of my writing I'm like ...

Totally agree with this short poem, short poems surprisingly (well some of them) have a lot of meaning, like I'm assuming this is about one girl is much more better ...