harrington

Hi there, The other reviewer said how it was hard to read, but I actually found I read it quite easily. I thought it was one of the best 'friendship' ...

Hi there, So most people have already said what I was going to say so I'll just add an a few bits. I thought this was lovely, and actually sounded ...

Hi there, I liked the idea of this poem and also enjoyed the way you seemed torn with whether you like 'time' or not. It's interesting and thought provoking because ...

Hi there, Wowsers, for a 14 year old, this is major! I loved it and if I had to guess, I would say this was written by someone in their ...

Hi there, I read this over twice and both times I really enjoyed it. I loved the idea that you set and it's very thought-provoking. The language that you use, ...

Hi there, The first thing I want to say, other than 'Woo, doctor Who' is that your imagery is really good. Your opening drew the reader in and made them ...

Hi there, So my first thought was that it was actually really good for a first attempt, and your bio says you're 14, which is really impressive. Let me tell ...

Hi there, I really enjoyed reading this. I think your imagery works really well and I feel happier once I've read it so well done. I loved this line here: ...

Hi there, So I got to say, I'm half and half with this poem. I can't decide whether I don't like it, or I don't like it because I can't ...

Hi there, So I read it over and I thought it was really well written. You have a nice easy to read writing style and it made me want to ...

Hey there, So I was going to say quite a few things but it seems other reviewers have beat me there! I pretty much agree with what the other people ...

Hi there, I actually think this could have a lot of potential, because it's an idea I haven't really thought about before. People write about the idea of twins being ...

Hi there, I read this over a couple of times and I quite liked it. I like the description and imagery you use, and the way you incorporated the use ...

Hi there, Just a few things I would fix: 'Its' should be 'it's' because it's short for 'it has'. You may want to reconsider your rhyming and whether it needs ...

Hi there, I thought this was fun and quirky. I liked how you took an unconventional subject and personified it. But then you took it one step further and recognised ...